Superstar's Runaway

Title: Superstar's Runaway
Author: by anaa xD
URL: http://www.winglin.net/fanfic/anaa7/
Reviewed by: Lamer_

Title = 10/10
Interesting Title.. It did catch my eye when I first read it.. Unique in it’s way.. Superstar runaway.. :)

Creativity of the story = 19/20
I totally adore your comedy way of writing.. How you made them bump into S.H.E look-a-like and how things turn out to be so different from other story.. Your comedy writing really helps a lot for the creativity-ness and I hope to see more of them in the upcoming updates for your story.. But do add in more emotional-parts of the character to enhance the story..

Posters & background = 10 /10
I love the poster.. It’s lovely.. The font that you're using is very easy to read and it doesn't hurt the readers' eyes while reading like some other stories I have seen.. And I totally think the poster suit the theme.. :)

Casts used = 5/5
Fahrenheit & S.H.E.R.. The way you made the cast looks and feels in the story look refreshing to me.. Good job..

Originality= 19/20
The story is totally funny and great.. I love how the superstar runaway and met S.H.E look-a-like whom don’t eve know who Fahrenheit is.. The idea is crazy and great.. Very original and nice..

Storyline/plotting = 19/20
Your storyline is totally funny and great.. I like the flow of the popular superstar running away and met strange events that they don’t even can explain and the comedy part of the story really tickle me a lot.. Great job.. Maybe I suggest you add in more emotion part to let the reader feel how the character feels..

Spelling/Grammar = 4/5
Found some.. But overall still ok.. Overall enjoyment = 10 /10 I really did enjoy this fanfic, it's great so keep on updating! I’m very excited and anxious to know what will happen next.. I really can’t stop laughing at how the events turns and your comedy writing really brighten up my day..

Total: 96
Additional Remark: Although I finish my reviews.. I really hope you can update soon because I can’t wait to read on the great story.. Really.. It’s a really funny story that never fails to made me laugh.. Update soon..

The Long Wait

Title:The Long Wait

Author: sn0wiie

URL: http://www.winglin.net/fanfic/sn0wiie/

Reviewer: Miyuki

Title: The Long Wait 8/10

Maybe you could've chosen a more intriguing title, but this one is nice all the same. It sounds down but there is a ray of hope in his/her voice, keeping him/her going.

Foreword: 9/10

It was an attentive forewards which allowed readers an insight of the cast's inner lives and their own personal thoughts. The P.O.Vs were a good idea. Although I have praised your forewards, I still find a downfall in them. It does not exactly tell the readers what the story is about. Although you may be wanting them to find out for themselves as the story progresses on, but as you might have realised, at the back of books there is a thing called a blurb. A blurb gives a brief introduction to the story telling the readers what to expect. But from your cast profile, all we have gathered is that there probably would be some sort of ... disagreement? Argument? Between the poor orphans and the rich kids Hebe, Angela, Ella, Jiro, Aaron, Calvin, and Wu Chun (Chun) respectively.

Poster&Background: 5/10

The poster didn't really suit the title. Yes, it was dark and gloomy, like the title, except it didn't really bring out the tragicness of the title. 'The Long Wait' suggests something heartbreaking has happened, and the girl or boy lead has to wait a long time for the other to come back. The background was just a slightly larger version of the poster, so same comments to it also.

Character(s) Used: 5/5

Yes, I like the mixture.

Originality: 15/20

Well, I find the bit about Baddie and Aaron along with the rock a bit exaggereated. I mean, if it is a sharp rock, how sharp can a rock lying by the pavement be? Even if it was extraordinarily sharp, it wouldn't exactly hurt him like that. But anyway, your story was rather interesting at the beginning, but as it slowly progressed onwards, I found that it started to drag a bit. Everything was just so complicated, but your idea of adding crime into what seemed like a typical love story was intriguing.

Story&Plotting: 15/20

Your story, as I have mentioned above, is very fascinating. Your plotting seems well and organised although sometimes

Spelling/Grammer/Vocabulary: 8.5/10

Your spelling was satisfactory and praiseworthy though there were minor mistakes. Your Grammar wasn't exactly atrocious, but then again, to have perfect Grammar is a very hard thing to achieve! Although, yes, this area has room for some polishing and amendment, it is still quite good. Under the Vocabulary area, you could use a thesaurus and replace some often used words instead to make it more interesting. However, that is my opinion, your story is fine.

Overall Enjoyment: 14/15

Overall, this was an exciting story with two genres that I enjoy. It was engaging at times, and others, not. I found it gripping, readable, engrossing and enthralling. This has been one of the few fanfictions that I have actually enjoyed immensely and not fallen asleep through it while reviewing. I deeply urge you to complete this fanfiction and tell me when you do finish cuz I'll be there, commenting! In my opinion, the love web was very confusing. All the 'fall in love with one person and next thing you know they likes another'. Your whole quotes idea was very good. It helped deepen the whole atmosphere =]

Personal Opinion:Ehhs, I just noticed, all three reviewers from deliri0us, ffaddicts and Viva Teamo gave you quite near the same marks. So, keep our advice in mind and you'll improve! Umm, sorry if I hurt you verbally in any way.

Total Marks: 79.5/100

Me, His Maid

Title: Me, His Maid
Author: by forever_sfh
URL: http://www.winglin.net/fanfic/his_maid/
Reviewed by: Lamer_

Title = 7.5/10
Interesting Title.. It did catch my eye when I first read it.. Catchy and short.. :)

Creativity of the story = 16/20
Very sweet and lovely story.. I like the sweet way of how they fall in love… Sweet and clear..

Posters & background = 9/10
I love the poster and background! Great layout and theme.. It really suit the love genre.. Pink really give people a sweet taste..

Casts used = 4/5
Hebe and Arron.. I adore this pair very much..

Originality= 16/20 Not too bad.. Very sweet and loving.. I love the sweetness and clear breaking parts.. It doesn’t drag like some story.. :) Good job..

Storyline/plotting = 17 /20
Although it’s pretty common plot used.. I still like the sweet and clear way you wrote.. Make me really felt so in love with the story.. Good job.. :)

Spelling/Grammar = 4.5/5
I hardly spot any spelling or grammar mistake.. Good Job.. I can’t blame you for the spacing part as you explain..

Overall enjoyment = 8.5 /10

The fanfic was really sweet and nice.. Lovely and good.. I love the sweet moment of the couple.. Good job.. :)

Total: 82.5

Once Upon A Curse

Title: Once Upon A Curse
Author: by sn0wiie
URL: http://www.winglin.net/fanfic/FeiLunHai/
Reviewed by: Lamer_

Title = 9/10
Interesting Title.. It did catch my eye when I first read it.. Unique in it’s way.. It does match with the story.. A Curse.. :)

Creativity of the story = 15/20
Pretty funny at some part.. It was a nice plot with a nice flow.. Good job..

Posters & background = 7 /10
I love the poster and background! But the color theme doesn’t really suit the genre of funny.. Maybe you should try something bright instead.. But it’s not too bad after all..

Casts used = 4/5
Interesting Cast use.. Mixture of cast is good..

Originality= 14/20

Not too bad.. Parts are pretty good and funny to read on.. Originality was there for times.. The flow was nice and good..

Storyline/plotting = 14 /20
Your storyline at some moment was a bit confusing to me.. Jumping here and there and switching places to places.. Making me a bit hard to catch up.. But.. It was rather nice to read this kind of lovely story.. Good job..

Spelling/Grammar = 4/5
I hardly spot any spelling or grammar mistake.. Good Job..

Overall enjoyment = 7 /10

The fanfic was really funny and nice.. :) Keep up the good work.. I really enoojy reading it.. :)
Total: 74

Your Heart, My Heart

Title: Your Heart, My Heart

Author: Faridah, Harmony, Maddie, Maira, Geri, Monica

URL: http://www.winglin.net/fanfic/Edwise/

Reviewed by: Yvonne

Title = 6/10

I advice you not to use a song name as your fan fic title as it won't captivate readers as much as a brand new title.

Creativity of the story = 17/20

Your creativity can be easily seen through your story.Keep up the good job!

Posters & background = 6/10

Don't you think the poster is a little too small? And also a little too plain? You should have put a background and also change the font colour.

Casts used = 5/5

Cyndi and Nicholas are rarely seen on winglin.Great choice of casts!

Originality= 17/20

Along the way there are some parts that are quite cliched but it's still fine.

Storyline/plotting = 18 /20

As mentioned earlier,along the way there are some parts that are quite cliched.But your story pace is going at the right speed and your story is also smooth flowing.

Spelling/Grammar = 4/5

Next time maybe you could recheck the chapter first incase of errors made.Because I spotted some errors here and there.

Overall enjoyment = 6/10

I enjoyed reading your story.

Total: 79/ 100

Lost Reflection

Title: Lost Reflection
Author: frh_rocks!!
URL: http://www.winglin.net/fanfic/lost_reflection/
Reviewed By: Yvonne


Title = 8/10
Interesting title. Mysterious and captivating at the same time.

Creativity of the story = 17/20
I can see the way your creativity flow into the story. You put all your creative thoughts to it. Very creative, great job!

Posters & background = 10/10
Your poster has a very captivating effect. The colors and all make it so much more attractive.

Casts used = 3/5
Fahrenheit and S.H.E are very common nowadays. The pairings you used are also quite common.

Originality= 15/20
Some parts along the way are a little cliched but overall it's fine.

Storyline/plotting = 16/20
Like I said, along the way there are some parts which are quite cliched. But the pace your story is going is just fine.

Spelling/Grammar = 3/5
You might want to recheck your chapters after you're done.Because I spotted quite a few errors here and there. Overall enjoyment = 6/10I enjoyed reading your story. Keep up the good work.

Total: 78/100

Complicated Ecstasy

Title: Complicated Ecstasy
Author: CEfan4eva
URL: http://www.winglin.net/fanfic/CEfan4eva/
Reviewed by: Yvonne

Title = 8/10
Interesting title, it caught my attention when I had to do your review.

Creativity of the story = 17/20
I'm not really interested in rated stories. Cause I'm underage, lol. But I find your story very interesting and creative. The twist and all adds so much more to the captivating storyline.Good job

Posters & background = 7 /10
I can't see your poster no matter how many times I refresh the page so maybe you would want to re-check the link??? Since I couldn't see the poster I can't give you any marks on it. But I love your background and the fact that your font color and background doesn't clash.

Casts used = 3/5
Chun and Ella is very common nowadays

Originality= 17/20
Your story is really original. The secret agent stuff and all plus the 'rated' scenes. lol. Good job.

Storyline/plotting = 18 /20
Like I said earlier your storyline is captivating.You progress in a perfect pace, not to fast nor too slow. Not like some stories that progress in the speed of light.Keep up the good work!

Spelling/Grammar = 5/5
So far I didn't see any so keep up the good work

Overall enjoyment = 8 /10
I enjoyed reading your story alot.

Total: 83 / 100