Melon's Review

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By meL0n

Review Criteria

REVIEWED BY: H panda

Title = 8/10

~I guess this story title was not 100% creative but if a reader was scrolling down the Winglin homepage, and he or she knew the meaning to this slang, they’d probably click on it.

Creativity of the story = 14/20

~I don’t know if it’s just me not reading as much on Winglin as other reviewers, but this seems pretty fresh to me. However, I’ve seen way, way, way too many triangular loves this simple.

Posters & bkgrd = 7/10

~I think the poster of this story was kind of sad while the tone of the story was actually quite cheerful (for now at least) And the black for the background is kind of depressing as well.

Casts used = 4/5

~The casts used are quite popular characters on Winglin so they attract lots of attention.

Originality = 14/20

~Just like what I said before, I’ve seen way too many triangular loves this simple. I was hoping it’d be more complicated and complex.

Storyline/plotting= 17/20

~The plotting for this story isn’t bad! As a matter of fact, it makes sense and is easy to read and flow through.

Spelling/Grammar = 4/5

~I didn’t catch many spelling and grammar mistakes yet there are a few so I deducted a mark.

Overall enjoyment = 8/10

~I enjoyed reading this however, it could be a bit more complex or else it’s too straight-
forward.

Total = 76%