Love Season by Cryselle
Title: Love Seasons by CryselleFanfic Reviewed by: xIaojO
Title: 10/10
Firstly, your title is somehow eye catching enough to catch someone attention and it is also a unique title which links the title together with the plots and characters so I gave you full marks for your Title.
Creativity of story: 20/20
This story definitely have the creativity in each part of the story like the part where Chun met Phoebe running on the streets and he thinks that she’s Hebe and never knew that’s Hebe’s twin sister, another point I feel that the idea is creative is that you placed them in the shoes of a model and at the same time working in their own company which I never came across Fahrenheit being a model. This few points that I have just mention in the story, has enough of creativity in it which unlikely no one have tried I suppose.
Poster & Background: 10/10
Nice and Marvellous poster you have here. The poster have clearly describe the different love seasons in each of every couples/cast in the story, it has also quote the meaning of every season and it’s colour and contrast has remarkably suits the entire story. Lastly, the yellow background suits the pinkish red font and they blends in well together, so again I gave you full marks for this section.
Cast Used: 8/10
This time I gave you 8 marks for this section because the casts you used is actually the two hottest pop group now in winglin or even the singing career but the only sad thing is that you place Chun alone until the ending chapter as everyone hope he will be together with Phoebe but no in the end he is alone so this is the most disappointed thing. Anyway, all the others casts are pair up nicely according to their character and they suits well.
Originality: 20/20
Full marks for your originality! Love season is obviously a original fan fiction out there with no copy of others plot from another story.
Storyline/Plotting: 17/20
I truly love your storyline and the plot you place in love season which it is really unique of using season to actually implant in a love and each of every season got to suits the couple character for example Hebe and Aaron’s relationship, their relationship is as cold as winter in the beginning that they don’t like each other and their wedding started to dies off when Phoebe and Chun’s issue came up on the magazine that’s make Aaron’s jealousy aroused than he started to minus out his trust towards Hebe and it surely suits it quote very much. The other nice plotting of you putting Ella driving a motorbike, going to the pub for de-stress and is almost different from her normal character but I have another disappointment here that’s Ella and Jiro’s relationship, they same how get together quite late from the story which it does not show many of their part together alone as a couple but anyway is still a good plot.
Spelling/Grammer: 5/5
You surely don’t have much spelling mistake in this story and of course your grammer is fabulous, you got perfect English and I don’t think I have the right to minus you marks.
Overall Enjoyment: 8 /10
I absolutely enjoy Cryselle production because of every cliffhanger she placed in the chapters but of course not every chapter have cliffhanger but her cliffhanger makes me having the urge to continue reading until the ending chapter. Lastly, I gave 8 marks for the Overall enjoyment is because not every cast have a perfect ending though I am not a Chun's fans but I still prefer him having to be with someone other than Ella.
Total: 98 /100
Remarks: Though there’s some minus points in one of the few sections but it still add up to 98 marks which is two marks down from 100% so I still think Love Season is a great story done by Cryselle and readers go check it out, I bet you won’t regret.
Firstly, your title is somehow eye catching enough to catch someone attention and it is also a unique title which links the title together with the plots and characters so I gave you full marks for your Title.
Creativity of story: 20/20
This story definitely have the creativity in each part of the story like the part where Chun met Phoebe running on the streets and he thinks that she’s Hebe and never knew that’s Hebe’s twin sister, another point I feel that the idea is creative is that you placed them in the shoes of a model and at the same time working in their own company which I never came across Fahrenheit being a model. This few points that I have just mention in the story, has enough of creativity in it which unlikely no one have tried I suppose.
Poster & Background: 10/10
Nice and Marvellous poster you have here. The poster have clearly describe the different love seasons in each of every couples/cast in the story, it has also quote the meaning of every season and it’s colour and contrast has remarkably suits the entire story. Lastly, the yellow background suits the pinkish red font and they blends in well together, so again I gave you full marks for this section.
Cast Used: 8/10
This time I gave you 8 marks for this section because the casts you used is actually the two hottest pop group now in winglin or even the singing career but the only sad thing is that you place Chun alone until the ending chapter as everyone hope he will be together with Phoebe but no in the end he is alone so this is the most disappointed thing. Anyway, all the others casts are pair up nicely according to their character and they suits well.
Originality: 20/20
Full marks for your originality! Love season is obviously a original fan fiction out there with no copy of others plot from another story.
Storyline/Plotting: 17/20
I truly love your storyline and the plot you place in love season which it is really unique of using season to actually implant in a love and each of every season got to suits the couple character for example Hebe and Aaron’s relationship, their relationship is as cold as winter in the beginning that they don’t like each other and their wedding started to dies off when Phoebe and Chun’s issue came up on the magazine that’s make Aaron’s jealousy aroused than he started to minus out his trust towards Hebe and it surely suits it quote very much. The other nice plotting of you putting Ella driving a motorbike, going to the pub for de-stress and is almost different from her normal character but I have another disappointment here that’s Ella and Jiro’s relationship, they same how get together quite late from the story which it does not show many of their part together alone as a couple but anyway is still a good plot.
Spelling/Grammer: 5/5
You surely don’t have much spelling mistake in this story and of course your grammer is fabulous, you got perfect English and I don’t think I have the right to minus you marks.
Overall Enjoyment: 8 /10
I absolutely enjoy Cryselle production because of every cliffhanger she placed in the chapters but of course not every chapter have cliffhanger but her cliffhanger makes me having the urge to continue reading until the ending chapter. Lastly, I gave 8 marks for the Overall enjoyment is because not every cast have a perfect ending though I am not a Chun's fans but I still prefer him having to be with someone other than Ella.
Total: 98 /100
Remarks: Though there’s some minus points in one of the few sections but it still add up to 98 marks which is two marks down from 100% so I still think Love Season is a great story done by Cryselle and readers go check it out, I bet you won’t regret.
P.S Sorry for any grammer mistakes
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