High School Agents
Title of fan fiction: High School Agents
Author: Sheepoling
URL: http://www.winglin.net/fanfic/Sheepoling1
Reviewer: SHE_Fahrenheit
Title: 10/10
The title was unique and aroused my interest to read it way before I had to do a review for you. Frankly speaking, I’m enthusiastic to do a review on this story. It relates to the story a lot.
Poster/Background: 10/10
Again, I’m caught at a loss for words as the poster, background of the fan fiction is very nice and I have no complains. The font colour and background color was legible as well.
Forewords: 10/10
The forewords... were BRILLANT or rather, EXCELLENT. After reading your previous fan fiction, I did not expect you to write out such a brilliant forewords. You wrote out a brilliant introduction to the story.
Flow & Writing Quality: 15/15
Again, the writing quality and flow were great and it does urge readers to read on. This is a simply great fan fiction.
Storyline/Plot: 14/15
It connected with the main characters perfectly. Except for the mixed personalities part and Enigma and so on so forth, my head gets a headache thinking of who is who when I read. Maybe you could make the story clearer; otherwise, it is all good.
Creativity/Originality: 10/10
The story was a stroke of genius, the creativity and originality mark is there.
Spelling & Grammar: 13/15
The grammar part is not so nice, perhaps you should improve your grammar a little, but vocabulary is great, if I’m not wrong, I spotted some spelling errors.
Overall Enjoyment: 14/15
The story was great and interesting however they are some parts which have room for improvement as well as some parts which needs modification as the reader gets easily confused by the common question,” Who is Who?” Albeit all the negative comments given, the story is great and you did a good job on it.
Total: 96/100
Author: Sheepoling
URL: http://www.winglin.net/fanfic/Sheepoling1
Reviewer: SHE_Fahrenheit
Title: 10/10
The title was unique and aroused my interest to read it way before I had to do a review for you. Frankly speaking, I’m enthusiastic to do a review on this story. It relates to the story a lot.
Poster/Background: 10/10
Again, I’m caught at a loss for words as the poster, background of the fan fiction is very nice and I have no complains. The font colour and background color was legible as well.
Forewords: 10/10
The forewords... were BRILLANT or rather, EXCELLENT. After reading your previous fan fiction, I did not expect you to write out such a brilliant forewords. You wrote out a brilliant introduction to the story.
Flow & Writing Quality: 15/15
Again, the writing quality and flow were great and it does urge readers to read on. This is a simply great fan fiction.
Storyline/Plot: 14/15
It connected with the main characters perfectly. Except for the mixed personalities part and Enigma and so on so forth, my head gets a headache thinking of who is who when I read. Maybe you could make the story clearer; otherwise, it is all good.
Creativity/Originality: 10/10
The story was a stroke of genius, the creativity and originality mark is there.
Spelling & Grammar: 13/15
The grammar part is not so nice, perhaps you should improve your grammar a little, but vocabulary is great, if I’m not wrong, I spotted some spelling errors.
Overall Enjoyment: 14/15
The story was great and interesting however they are some parts which have room for improvement as well as some parts which needs modification as the reader gets easily confused by the common question,” Who is Who?” Albeit all the negative comments given, the story is great and you did a good job on it.
Total: 96/100
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