Lovie's Review

Title: Crane Affinity

Author: Lovie

URL: http://www.winglin.net/fanfic/Fahrenheit_rulz/

Reviewed By: Twilight_Girl

Title: 10/10The title is good. I have seen your story around a few times but never gotto read it. ahahas and now I do! I think 'Crane Affinity' can get peoplesattentions. It got my brothers. lolxx.

Creativity: 18/20

I think the story is creative. There are some very interesting parts andsome parts that were a little boring and I didn't quite understand. Butother than that it was creative and original. :D

Poster: 5/10

The poster was a bit small and it didn't have the title on it. But I thoughtthe pictures were really cute!

Cast: 5/5

I loved the cast!!! haha, they are one of the casts I like to read now eversince i saw hana kimi :Dhehe and i love S.H.E. and Fahrenheit!

Originality: 20/20

Hehe, your story is really original. I don't think I have seen or read afanfiction about cranes and I was surprised to see one. :D haha not tomention I love to fold cranes myself ;)

Plot: 18/20

The plot was pretty good but there were those some parts that I wanted toskip or I didn't really understand at all.

Grammar: 4/5

There were some errors or a couple of words you left out in chapters. Andsome parts that I didn't really understand by the way you phrased them. Forexample: I could the struggle inside Ella...Are you trying to say: I couldsee the struggle inside Ella. Since Chun was back yesterday, I have slept awink the night before.Since Chun came back yesterday, I hadn't slept a winkthe night before.

Overall enjoyment: 7/10

I thought the story was good, really. But there were just some parts Ididn't want to read or I didn't understand. But, you need to finish yourstory before I can really give you the Overall enjoyment. This story is goodand keep up the good work lah! I'll be looking forward to reading more. :D

Total: 87/100- helped by a friend xp