snowangel155,orangecake3 fanfic review
Title: SuperMum To The Rescue
Author: snowangel155,orangecake3
Reviewed By: suju501
Title = 10/10
I'll give you a ten for the lovely yet hilarious title, it makes me laugh whenever I reread it, good job on choosing such a unique title.
Creativity of the story = 19/20
I have never seen such a plot in my life before so I thought it's very unique and cute. I have seen lots of stories for Aaron and Hebe but yours is the best so far, I love how you describe the activities so detail so that I could see what's going on while reading and how funny Hebe's.
Posters & background = 10 /10
I love the poster, it's so cute and eye-catching, the font that you're using is very easy to read and it doesn't hurt the readers' eyes while reading like some other stories I have seen.
Casts used = 4/5
Hebe and Aaron are the most popular couple on Winglin lately but you managed to make the story so interesting so good job! You also did a great job on the foreword but next time please tell us more about your other characters and their feelings.
Originality= 19/20
What could I say? I just love your story so much!
Storyline/plotting = 19 /20
The storyline is very unique as I have said before, which make I love it so much! I love everything in your story, I especially love the beginning with Aaron and the burnt pancake.
Spelling/Grammar = 4/5
Your grammar and spelling are great but as I read through the story I spotted a few small mistakes so I think 4 points should do.
Overall enjoyment = 10 /10
Thanks for writing such a cute, hilarious story! Hope you update soon! I love it so much!
Total: 95 /100
Reviewer Thoughts:
I hope you're happy with what I have done, if you have any problem or question feel free to tag me anytime and please update soon! I am in love with this fan fic already!
I'll give you a ten for the lovely yet hilarious title, it makes me laugh whenever I reread it, good job on choosing such a unique title.
Creativity of the story = 19/20
I have never seen such a plot in my life before so I thought it's very unique and cute. I have seen lots of stories for Aaron and Hebe but yours is the best so far, I love how you describe the activities so detail so that I could see what's going on while reading and how funny Hebe's.
Posters & background = 10 /10
I love the poster, it's so cute and eye-catching, the font that you're using is very easy to read and it doesn't hurt the readers' eyes while reading like some other stories I have seen.
Casts used = 4/5
Hebe and Aaron are the most popular couple on Winglin lately but you managed to make the story so interesting so good job! You also did a great job on the foreword but next time please tell us more about your other characters and their feelings.
Originality= 19/20
What could I say? I just love your story so much!
Storyline/plotting = 19 /20
The storyline is very unique as I have said before, which make I love it so much! I love everything in your story, I especially love the beginning with Aaron and the burnt pancake.
Spelling/Grammar = 4/5
Your grammar and spelling are great but as I read through the story I spotted a few small mistakes so I think 4 points should do.
Overall enjoyment = 10 /10
Thanks for writing such a cute, hilarious story! Hope you update soon! I love it so much!
Total: 95 /100
Reviewer Thoughts:
I hope you're happy with what I have done, if you have any problem or question feel free to tag me anytime and please update soon! I am in love with this fan fic already!
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