Love can be _____ (keeping u peeps in suspense)

Title: Love can be _____ (keeping u peeps in suspense)

Author: by restrictedmic

URL: http://www.winglin.net/fanfic/restrictedmic/

Reviewed by: suju501

Title = 10/10What could i say? I just madly in love with the title! You did a very good job on choosing the title and i think that it really does relate to the story, which is great.

Creativity of the story = 19/20
The plot that you have chosen is pretty popular these days but you really did a great job on developing it and making it so interesting to read.


Posters & background = 10 /10
I love the poster and background! It's just so cute and lovely, just like the mood you're creating in the story. The font that you're using is very easy to read and it doesn't hurt the readers' eyes while reading like some other stories I have seen.

Casts used = 5/5

Love it so much! Fahrenheit, S.H.E, and Rainie are just cuties. I love all the stories about them so keep up the good work and update soon!

Originality= 20/20

What could i say {again}? It's lovely, you sure did an awesome job on this fanfic of yours.

Storyline/plotting = 19 /20

Your storyline is quite interesting and it hooked me a lot, i read the whole story in one day even though my time doesn't allowed it. I love it a lot.

Spelling/Grammar = 3.5/5
I'll give you a 3.5 on this because while i was reading i had spotted lots of mistake and i also know that you are a Singaporean so your English is pretty good {based on the story so far}. Here are some ex. of your mistakes.

1. ella fell into the pool, instead of a lower case e you should have capitalised it.

2. kiss her cheecks, instead of that you should write: Kissed her on the cheeks.

3. if there is really no 1 else?- instead of using 1 i think it would be better if you write it out {one}.

Overall enjoyment = 10 /10

I really did enjoy this fanfic, it's great so keep on updating!

Total: 96.5

Reviewer Thoughts: Well, i already said what's in my mind while writing the review so yeah, your fanfic is just so good! I am addicted to it already ^_^, so update soon!