..::So Your Roomate`s a Pervert::..
Title: ..::So Your Roomate`s a Pervert::..
Author: Sheepoling
Reviewed by: suju501
Title = 10/10
I love the title, it's cool and unique! Great job whoever created it for the challenge.
Creativity of the story = 20/20
The plot that you have cooked up is very creative and unique and is very different from the rest of other fanfics i had read so far. So good job.
Posters & background = 9/10
The poster is greatly done but as for the background you should have chosen a different color instead of white to make it catchier to readers. Anyways. please don't be offended since it's just my opinion.
Casts used = 5/5
The casts that's used in the story are so popular among fanfics on winglin lately but you managed to make the story very interesting so great job on that.
Originality= 20/20
Even though this is a writing challenge but you did very good on creating the plot bases on the little info that had came together with the challenge so great job.
Storyline/plotting = 20 /20
As i have said above, this is just so interesting and unique to read about.
Spelling/Grammar = 5/5
You did fine on this, i barely see any mistake as i read along.
Overall enjoyment = 10 /10
The story's too fast or too slow for me, which is great. And i love it.
Total: 99/100
Reviewer Thoughts: Please don't be offended by what i have said.
I love the title, it's cool and unique! Great job whoever created it for the challenge.
Creativity of the story = 20/20
The plot that you have cooked up is very creative and unique and is very different from the rest of other fanfics i had read so far. So good job.
Posters & background = 9/10
The poster is greatly done but as for the background you should have chosen a different color instead of white to make it catchier to readers. Anyways. please don't be offended since it's just my opinion.
Casts used = 5/5
The casts that's used in the story are so popular among fanfics on winglin lately but you managed to make the story very interesting so great job on that.
Originality= 20/20
Even though this is a writing challenge but you did very good on creating the plot bases on the little info that had came together with the challenge so great job.
Storyline/plotting = 20 /20
As i have said above, this is just so interesting and unique to read about.
Spelling/Grammar = 5/5
You did fine on this, i barely see any mistake as i read along.
Overall enjoyment = 10 /10
The story's too fast or too slow for me, which is great. And i love it.
Total: 99/100
Reviewer Thoughts: Please don't be offended by what i have said.
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