The Fliar Game
Title: The Flair Game
Author: by Lychee
URL: http://www.winglin.net/fanfic/apurplelife3/
Reviewed by: Lamer
Title = 9/10
Interesting Title.. It did catch my eye when I first read it.. Unique in it’s way.. It does match with the story.. A game..
Creativity of the story = 18/20
Action.. Romance.. So far.. Up till the chapter 4 u wrote.. The creativity is there.. The wide vocabulary you use made me interested in the story.. The plot some how is like those usual action type ones but with a fine touch of beautiful vocabulary.. Great Job for the fine Vocabulary you use.. The Action part is creative as the plot used are nicely wrote..
Posters & background = 10 /10
I love the poster and background! It’s lively and bright and very vibrant. Suitable for romance and Action type.. The font that you're using is very easy to read and it doesn't hurt the readers' eyes while reading like some other stories I have seen.
Casts used = 4/5
Interesting Cast use.. But it is a bit confusing as you choose not to use their real names in it.. I saw a comment about it at your comment page.. But overall.. Interesting mixture of cast used
Originality= 18/20
What can I say.. I hardly read any of those type you wrote.. So I can’t really comment about it.. But the plot and the cast are quite refreshing.. The mark are for the interesting mixture of your cast and the great variety of vocabulary you use to describe the story.. Thumb up..
Storyline/plotting = 18 /20
Your storyline is quite interesting it. I love it a lot. You have a pretty interesting foreword that attract my attentions when I first read it.. The plot are all finely written by you with a great range of vocabulary use.. Thumb up for that.. Nice flow in the storyline.. The wide vocabulary use spice up the whole story..
Spelling/Grammar = 5/5
Full mark for you.. I hardly spot any spelling or grammar mistake.. Good Job..
Overall enjoyment = 10 /10
I really did enjoy this fanfic, it's great so keep on updating! I’m very excited and anxious to know what will happen next..
Total: 92 / 100
Reviewer Thoughts: Although I’ve spoke out my mind.. I still want to say a really thumb up for your wide vocabulary use.. It spice the story up and it really make me wanting to reading on.. So.. Keep on updating.. I’m addicted to your story already..
Author: by Lychee
URL: http://www.winglin.net/fanfic/apurplelife3/
Reviewed by: Lamer
Title = 9/10
Interesting Title.. It did catch my eye when I first read it.. Unique in it’s way.. It does match with the story.. A game..
Creativity of the story = 18/20
Action.. Romance.. So far.. Up till the chapter 4 u wrote.. The creativity is there.. The wide vocabulary you use made me interested in the story.. The plot some how is like those usual action type ones but with a fine touch of beautiful vocabulary.. Great Job for the fine Vocabulary you use.. The Action part is creative as the plot used are nicely wrote..
Posters & background = 10 /10
I love the poster and background! It’s lively and bright and very vibrant. Suitable for romance and Action type.. The font that you're using is very easy to read and it doesn't hurt the readers' eyes while reading like some other stories I have seen.
Casts used = 4/5
Interesting Cast use.. But it is a bit confusing as you choose not to use their real names in it.. I saw a comment about it at your comment page.. But overall.. Interesting mixture of cast used
Originality= 18/20
What can I say.. I hardly read any of those type you wrote.. So I can’t really comment about it.. But the plot and the cast are quite refreshing.. The mark are for the interesting mixture of your cast and the great variety of vocabulary you use to describe the story.. Thumb up..
Storyline/plotting = 18 /20
Your storyline is quite interesting it. I love it a lot. You have a pretty interesting foreword that attract my attentions when I first read it.. The plot are all finely written by you with a great range of vocabulary use.. Thumb up for that.. Nice flow in the storyline.. The wide vocabulary use spice up the whole story..
Spelling/Grammar = 5/5
Full mark for you.. I hardly spot any spelling or grammar mistake.. Good Job..
Overall enjoyment = 10 /10
I really did enjoy this fanfic, it's great so keep on updating! I’m very excited and anxious to know what will happen next..
Total: 92 / 100
Reviewer Thoughts: Although I’ve spoke out my mind.. I still want to say a really thumb up for your wide vocabulary use.. It spice the story up and it really make me wanting to reading on.. So.. Keep on updating.. I’m addicted to your story already..
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