::::What i LiKe aBout You::::

Title: ::::What i LiKe aBout You::::
Author: by *::::Shanie~Megan::::*
URL: http://www.winglin.net/fanfic/changminluvr/
Reviewed by: Lamer

Title = 8/10

Nice title.. It did catch my eyes when I start reading your story.. I think it’s more or else pretty link with the story.. Good one..

Creativity of the story = 17/20

Your Genre is about Romance and Comedy.. Romance is up in the story a lot.. It’s the pretty same with those out there in winglin but you did make some twist and surprise.. Your idea of making a guy whom just met a girl once fell in love with a girl madly and marry her when she is drank is brillant.. It make people’s imagination runs wild on how they did it.. A nice twist..

Posters & background = 6 /10
Although your don’t have a poster for your story but I like the background of the story.. It pretty fit the story mood.. Sweet and cute love romance.. But your colour font In the story is a bit hard to read as pink and purple blend in together .. so next time avoid using purple font when you are having a pink background..

Casts used = 4/5

Nice mixture of cast.. Interesting mixture for it.. Nice one..

Originality= 17/20

What can I say.. I hardly read on those korean cast fanfic out in winglin.. But your story has some nice idea of twist in it which make reader love to read on to find out more.. Good job for that.. My points is mainly given to the twist and turn for your story.. Good idea for it..

Storyline/plotting = 17 /20 Your storyline is quite interesting it. I love the idea of how a pair of person whom just met married suddenly and really fall in love in the process.. The twists in the story keep the reader excited to read on.. Plot is nice too.. The foreword is quite clear on the storyline and it make the reader anxious to find out how you will make the story turn out to be.. Great job..

Spelling/Grammar = 3/5
I spot pretty much spelling mistake in your story.. You tend to spell I’ll without the ’ in it.. I spot the whole lot of ill written instead of I’ll.. You do admit your mistake but you kind of make the same one when you come across it.. I point out some for you..

In your foreword..
‘as she getting out of bed, changmin walks out of the bathroom half naked...’
Instead of writing ‘as she getting out of bed’, you should write ‘as she is getting out of the bed’..
‘and now he wont agree to divorce her cuz hes beginning to like her a lot..
Instead of the writing cus, you should spell out because out..
Instead of writing hes, you should put in the ’ in it and make it he’s..
That is some of the mistake I spot inn your story..

Overall enjoyment = 8 /10 I enjoy reading your story.. It’s nice and sweet.. Nice twist in it too..

Good job for that.. Total: 80 / 100