Winter Sonata
Title: Winter Sonata
Author: kohana (a.k.a lixiangqingren)
URL: http://www.winglin.net/fanfic/wintersonata/
Reviewed By: xIaojO
Title: 8 / 10
Absolutely I love this title of yours 'Winter Sonata' not really because of the Korean Drama but is because the title brings out a sad and romantic feelings, somehow giving the readers a wild imagination of what will it happened in your story.
Creativity of Story: 20 / 20
Marvellous! Fabulous! Your story is obviously originate and creative in you way so you should deserve a full marks in this section.
Poster & Background: 10 / 10
Okays! I have not much to comments in this section as your poster suits the title well with it takes place on winter and the background with grey fonts really blends in well.
Casts Used: 5 / 5
A full marks for your characters as you used Ella and Chun. They are the best couple in winglin and I think they really suits eachother well especially in the plot that you are using.
Originality: 10 / 10
This section will be the same as the above one, you have your own way of writing this story with the plot you are applying it is true that it's originate from you.
Story / Plotting: 18 / 20
Your plot is absolutely unique! I love the way you write and was shocked of placing Ella of having a Mental IQ of only eight years old and was like being a 'beggar' to lives on streets everyday until the night when she met Chun, her life change totally into a girl who even don't know her identity and was given a name later. You really placed a twist in there of a unexpected cancer illness of Ella and with that she still live her life full of optismistic which not many people can do it and another one was where Jiro told Ella not to sees Chun, she harden her heart and controlling her heartache telling him to Get Out when she wants to see him, but not to mention that your story don't really have cliffhangers and your readers have already been addicted to your story so you might wants to placed some in there so you can let your readers gets a little excited or anxious and some of the chapters you did drag little which looks abit draggy and tend to be a little boring but still I love this story well. =)
Grammer / Spelling : 5 / 5
As far as I read until the recent chapter 18, there isn't any grammer or spelling mistakes to be spotted so I feels that upon this section you deserve a full marks. ;)
Overall Enjoyment: 10 / 10
Excellent writing skills and great story so far as I have read featuring Ella and Chun but maybe you can try to shorten your paragragh or not to drag the chapters too long. Anyway, I am will be waiting for your Chapter 19. =)
Total: 86 / 100 (highly recommended story)
Author: kohana (a.k.a lixiangqingren)
URL: http://www.winglin.net/fanfic/wintersonata/
Reviewed By: xIaojO
Title: 8 / 10
Absolutely I love this title of yours 'Winter Sonata' not really because of the Korean Drama but is because the title brings out a sad and romantic feelings, somehow giving the readers a wild imagination of what will it happened in your story.
Creativity of Story: 20 / 20
Marvellous! Fabulous! Your story is obviously originate and creative in you way so you should deserve a full marks in this section.
Poster & Background: 10 / 10
Okays! I have not much to comments in this section as your poster suits the title well with it takes place on winter and the background with grey fonts really blends in well.
Casts Used: 5 / 5
A full marks for your characters as you used Ella and Chun. They are the best couple in winglin and I think they really suits eachother well especially in the plot that you are using.
Originality: 10 / 10
This section will be the same as the above one, you have your own way of writing this story with the plot you are applying it is true that it's originate from you.
Story / Plotting: 18 / 20
Your plot is absolutely unique! I love the way you write and was shocked of placing Ella of having a Mental IQ of only eight years old and was like being a 'beggar' to lives on streets everyday until the night when she met Chun, her life change totally into a girl who even don't know her identity and was given a name later. You really placed a twist in there of a unexpected cancer illness of Ella and with that she still live her life full of optismistic which not many people can do it and another one was where Jiro told Ella not to sees Chun, she harden her heart and controlling her heartache telling him to Get Out when she wants to see him, but not to mention that your story don't really have cliffhangers and your readers have already been addicted to your story so you might wants to placed some in there so you can let your readers gets a little excited or anxious and some of the chapters you did drag little which looks abit draggy and tend to be a little boring but still I love this story well. =)
Grammer / Spelling : 5 / 5
As far as I read until the recent chapter 18, there isn't any grammer or spelling mistakes to be spotted so I feels that upon this section you deserve a full marks. ;)
Overall Enjoyment: 10 / 10
Excellent writing skills and great story so far as I have read featuring Ella and Chun but maybe you can try to shorten your paragragh or not to drag the chapters too long. Anyway, I am will be waiting for your Chapter 19. =)
Total: 86 / 100 (highly recommended story)
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