Monday, October 29, 2007

Diamond And Rust

Title: Diamond and Rust
Author: arcenciel
URL: www.winglin.net/fanfic/arcenciel
Reviewed By: suju 501

Title - 10/10

You have created a very unique and meaningful title, Great job! And best of all it does go well with the story in my opinion.

Poster/background – 10/10

Wow, what a beautiful poster, i love how the pinkish makes you feel loved and warm yet somewhat blended a little bit of sadness.


Foreword – 10/10

Your forewords are very catchy, which make the readers hungry for me, but i think you should add a little bit more info on the characters next time.

Flow/writing quality -15/15

The flow of your story is just perfect for me because it's not too slow or too fast. i love how you have described everything in such great detail.

Storyline/plot – 15/15

I love your plot! It's very common nowadays yet you have managed to make it so fine and beautiful.

Originality/creativity – 10/10

I have got nothing to say since it's perfect!

Grammar/spelling – 15/15

Great job on your grammar and spelling!

Casts used – 5/5
No comment here since they are just too loved by me ^_^

Overall enjoyment – 10/10
I really enjoyed it while reviewing the fic! Hope to see more of your work soon!

Total: 100/100

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