Sinful Temptations

Title: 10/10

I love the title, it's very unique, and best of all it does match up with the lovely storyline.

Creativity of Story: 20 / 20

I love the plot and all the stuff you have written so far. It's been a while since I last read about the love of a gangster and a normal girl an what they have to go through to be together. And, yeah, I love how Hebe threatens the poor Chun and Aaron, it's just too cute and funny for word, I also love how you portraits Selina and Jiro's confession to her.

Poster & Background: 9/10

The poster is beautiful but the bad thing is that the font that you currently use for the titles of the chapters, the red on the blue background makes it a little hard to read so please change. Please don't be offended I was just giving a friendly advise.

Cast Used: 10 / 10

I just love the cast so much. They're like my favorite Chinese groups ever! And the couples, too.

Originality: 20 / 20

As I already said above, this story is perfect. I Love everything about it, and how you blended the sad, funny, and lovely parts of the story all together.

Story / Plotting: 15 / 15

Your plot is very different from what I have seen so far on winglin, which is a great thing. I love your way of narrating the story and describe the character and let the readers understand more about the unique personality of each of them. Some of your chapters makes the readers jump around and can hardly wait to read the next chapter and I am one of those.

Grammar / Spelling: 5 / 5

Full mark! You did a great job on writing this story because I haven't yet found any mistake while reading it so keep up the great work.

Overall Enjoyment: 10 / 10

I totally enjoy this story of yours so update soon! Everything in the story make me keep on reading and clicking the next button, which is a very good thing.

Total: 99/100