B.lack M.oon D.estiny

Title: B.lack M.oon D.estiny
Author: th1rd3ye
URL: http://www.winglin.net/fanfic/BMD/
Reviewed By: Yvonne

Title -10/10
It's a really interesting title.Mysterious and captivating. Great job.

Creativity of the story -20/20
Very very creative! Magic and fantasy.The twist and everything is there.Thumbs up for you!

Posters and Backgrounds - 10/10
I like the poster it suits the story alot.The black and white effect really adds a blast to the whole package.The background and font is very reader friendly as well.

Casts used -5/5
I just love the pairings so no comments here~!

Originality - 20/20
A good job with the twist and climax of the story.You even wrote it with every single detail there.You deserve this 20 with no arguments or hesitation!

Storyline/Plotting - 20/20
I like the way your story goes.You take it one at a time like at first you introduce Black Moon to everyone then later on the cast.You do it at the right pace! And I like how your story goes. Good job!

Spelling/Grammar - 4/5
I saw a little spelling mistake at the beginning.For example I think you mean goddess and not godness. Overall enjoyment - 10/10I enjoyed your story very much and I think I'm turning into your reader as I'm very interested in it now.^.^

Total -99
(If you really meant godness and not goddess then add one more mark to the total.Cheers!)