Blackmailing Mr. Perfect

Title: Blackmailing Mr. Perfect
Author: by Kris-Su
URLhttp: http://www.winglin.net/fanfic/kris_su/
Reviewed by: Lamer_

Title = 9/10
Interesting Title.. It did catch my eye when I first read it..

Creativity of the story = 19/20
Comedy, Romance, Tragedy genre.. It’s pretty interesting to read your story.. Those twist and unknowns make me excited.. Those twist and turn in the story are pretty fresh and interesting.. Good job..

Posters & background = 9 /10
I love the poster.. But there is no background in the story.. The font that you're using is very easy to read and it doesn't hurt the readers' eyes while reading like some other stories I have seen.

Casts used = 4/5
Nice cast use.. An EG( Edison and Gillian) fanfic..

Originality= 18/20

The twist and turn in the story are pretty interesting.. How Gillian can become Sarah and forget Edison the next moment is pretty interesting and fresh.. The ending was pretty much sad but touching.. Good Job..

Storyline/plotting = 19 /20

Your storyline is quite interesting it. I love it a lot.. Nice flow in the storyline.. The twist ad turn in it was nice and good.. good job.. :) The ending was sad but touching.. It’s nice..

Spelling/Grammar = 4/5
Spot some.. But overall it’s good.. nice job..

Overall enjoyment = 9 /10

I really did enjoy this fanfic, it's great.. Sad romance story with a little comedy plus in it made it interesting.. :) Great Job.. Thumb up for you.. :)

Total: 91