Bull Fighting

Title: 鬥牛 要不要 (Bull Fighting)

Author: AngelaHebeMike

URL: http://www.winglin.net/fanfic/Angel92/

Reviewed By: Yvonne

Title = 4/10

Since you took the story from a show I can't give you higher marks.So I can only give you 4 marks for this.

Creativity of the story = 10/20

It's a nice story but too bad you took the idea from somewhere else and it isn't your own creativity.

Posters & background = 7 /10

I find the poster very simple.There's nothing special about it.So most of the marks I'm giving you is because your background colour and your font don't hurt the readers eyes.

Casts used = 4/5

Not many Mike and Hebe fan fics around but because you're following the cast of Bull Fighting I have to deduct a mark.

Originality= 10/20

Once again this isn't your original flow and not your original storyline so I can't give you more marks.

Storyline/plotting = 10/20

Same reason.You took it from somewhere else.

Spelling/Grammar = 3/5

You have to improve on your sentence structure and grammar as most of the mistakes are from this area. Example :'You must help her in no matter what. Is that clear?' It's suppose to be 'You must help her no matter what happens. Is that clear?'

Overall enjoyment = 8 /10

I enojyed this fanfic,so here I'll give you an eight.

Total: 56/100