Corrupt Desires

Title: Corrupt Desires
Author: by S.H.Ella
URL: http://www.winglin.net/fanfic/Corrupted/
Reviewed by: Lamer_

Title = 9/10

Interesting Title.. It catch my eyes when I first read it.. It does match with the story..

Creativity of the story = 19/20

Horror.. Romance.. Pretty interesting idea of demon and horror part was great.. The mystery of Ella missing and suddenly back is interesting.. Who really is the Killer is also making me wanting read on the story.. Very rarely seen use in fanfic idea.. I like your ideas a lot..

Posters & background = 10 /10

I love the poster and background! It suit the theme of horror.. The font that you're using is very easy to read and it doesn't hurt the readers' eyes while reading like some other stories I have seen.

Casts used = 4/5

Interesting mixture.. Wu Chun and Ella is popular among writer now with other like Hebe, Selina and Danson.. It’s nice..

Originality= 19/20

Horror type with interesting and fresh plot.. I like your story flow and is hook on the story.. Thumb up for the great idea of plot used.. Very original.. Demon and supernatural power used in it sound fresh and interesting to me.. Great job for it.. You done a great job describing those interesting plots..

Storyline/plotting = 19 /20

Your storyline is quite interesting it. I love it a lot. Supernatural stuff with horror type of plot interest me a lot.. I have become one of your reader already.. The mystery disappear of Ella and how it flow when Ella came back is nicely describe by you.. The plot is interesting.. Thumb up.. Carry on the great job..

Spelling/Grammar = 5/5

Full mark for you.. I hardly spot any spelling or grammar mistake.. Good Job..

Overall enjoyment = 10 /10

I really did enjoy this fanfic, it's great so keep on updating! I’m very excited and anxious to know what will happen next.. The horror plot really hook me on..

Total: 95

Reviewer Thoughts: Although I’ve spoke out my mind.. I still want to say a really thumb up for your interesting horror and supernatural plot used.. I’m hook on it.. SO keep updating it.. :)