Forget The Unforgotten

Title: Forget The Unforgotten
Author: by Fyone =)
URL: http://www.winglin.net/fanfic/Fvone/
Reviewed by: Lamer_

Title = 9/10
Interesting Title.. It did catch my eye when I first read it.. Unique in it’s way.. Forget the unforgotten.. :)

Creativity of the story = 18/20
Romance.. So far.. Up till the chapter u wrote..The wide vocabulary you use made me interested in the story.. Great Job for the fine Vocabulary you use..

Posters & background = 8 /10
I love the poster.. It’s lovely.. The font that you're using is very easy to read and it doesn't hurt the readers' eyes while reading like some other stories I have seen.

Casts used = 4/5
Hebe and Aaron.. I do like this paring a lot.. Nice one..

Originality= 18/20

The story is very interest and mystery in some ways.. I loove the plot flows and how hebe and arron met.. It’s nice.. Good job..

Storyline/plotting = 18 /20

Your storyline is quite interesting and nice. I love it a lot. You have a pretty interesting foreword that attract my attentions when I first read it.. The plot are all finely written by you with a great range of vocabulary use.. Thumb up for that.. Nice flow in the storyline.. The wide vocabulary use spice up the whole story.. The mystery and meeting of Hebe and Aaron is nicely write up..

Spelling/Grammar = 5/5
Full mark for you.. I hardly spot any spelling or grammar mistake.. Good Job..

Overall enjoyment = 10 /10

really did enjoy this fanfic, it's great so keep on updating! I’m very excited and anxious to know what will happen next..

Total: 90