Friends or Lover

Title: Friend or Lover
Author: Sweetie
URL: http://www.winglin.net/fanfic/sweetie1/
Reviewed By: xIaojO

Title: 9 / 10
Title! This title was much of a confusing title to me at first, thought it was going to be couple from friend to lover or lover to lover but overall it's still a unique title.

Creativity Of Story: 15 / 20
Friendship and Romance is actually a popular genre in winglin so I thought it would the same old story I use to read in winglin but yours gives me another thought of reading cause you place two women in between of Yunho in front and later a twist of Boa marrying Dong Hae instead of Yunho. The creative of your story is that you place two women snatching one man but as for others it's always the other way round.

Poster and Background: 7 / 10
Poster, a very lively, happy poster made by sweetkisses.co.nr and the background use in the story blends in well with the pink font, it's readable enough for the readers.

Cast Used: 5 / 5
Characters are pair up well so I don't think I have anything to comments here.

Originality: 18 / 20
This story is pretty original in it's way so nothing much I sees in your story actually came out in some other story and the twist from the last chapter update is exceptionally from your idea of seven objecting the marriage and hyori tries to shut him up.

Spelling / Grammer: 3 / 5
There's couple of spelling mistake here and there in the story but some still wasn't easy to identify so this isn't a big mistake but grammer mistakes wasn't big too, so 2marks for this section is being deducted for some of the spotable spelling mistakes.

Overall Enjoyment: 5 / 10
A just passed for overall enjoyment for some draggy parts in the story and some jumbling of the scene which somehow makes me confused, it also makes up to the last chapter about the vowing. At first I don't really know who is actually marrying Boa until I repeatedly read that part than I realised is Dong Hae.

Total: 62 / 100