Office Politics

Title: Office Politics

Author: xuewen

URL: http://winglin.net/fanfic/xuewen2/

Reviewed By: Yvonne

Title-10/10

I give you perfect score for this as I find the title quite catchy and it is related to the story.

Creativity of the story-17/20

I find your story very creative and unique in it's own way.Not many people writes in e-mail and IM form.

Poster and background-10/10

Your poster is plain,simple and eye catching at the same time.You manage to blend your background and poster perfectly by placing a dark background. I also have to give you a thumbs up for being able to find a perfect yellow font that doesn't make it hard for readers to read and at the same time doesn't blind the readers.

Cast used -5/5

I can't say much as I love to use the same cast as well.

Originality-18/20

I like the twist of your story and the way you express their feelings and thoughts.But because you followed Meg Cabot's minimalistic format I have to cut some marks out.

Storyline/plotting-18/20

I like your storyline and all but sometimes you kind of rush things a little too much? Try having more anticipating parts as to keep your readers in suspense and to make them want more.

Spelling/grammar-4/5

There's nothing wrong with your grammar but there are some spelling error,most probably typo errors.But overall it's all good.

Overall enjoyment-8/10

enjoyed your story but it did bore me at some parts as you write your chapters a little too long that you might frust your readers.Try writing shorter chapters as not all readers enjoy long chapters.

Overall marks-90/100

Please excuse me if I offended you.^.^