What happens when I fall in love?
Title: What happens when I fall in love? Author: Aaron_Fanatic_1
Reviewed: suju501
Title = 8/10
Your title is nice but somewhat a little cliche since I have seen it several times before.
Creativity of the story = 19/20
Like I have said in the title section, the story is nice but I have read a lot of story surrounding these same topics about love between Mr./Ms. Popular and an average one. But over all, nice writing and twists.
Posters & background = 9 /10
The poster is very cute, I also like the font color but they are a little bit too plain and since you're using a white background so may as well consider using some bright colors but not too bright to create a cheerful, happy mood toward the readers while they're reading.
Casts used = 5/5
I am totally in love with the casts! Nice job choosing them.
Originality= 18/20
I think it's very great so no comment on this part.
Storyline/plotting = 19 /20
Interesting plot/storyline, you know how to hook the readers' attention very well, which is a very good thing and needed for a great author. Greta job!
Spelling/Grammar = 3/5
Over all OK, but I seldom saw mistakes along the way together with a few typos so be sure to check it again and fix those. Nice job.
Overall enjoyment = 9 /10
I really enjoyed the story, thanks for writing it! Great job and please don't be offended by my comments ^_^, if you have any complains please contact me.
Total: 90/1oo
Your title is nice but somewhat a little cliche since I have seen it several times before.
Creativity of the story = 19/20
Like I have said in the title section, the story is nice but I have read a lot of story surrounding these same topics about love between Mr./Ms. Popular and an average one. But over all, nice writing and twists.
Posters & background = 9 /10
The poster is very cute, I also like the font color but they are a little bit too plain and since you're using a white background so may as well consider using some bright colors but not too bright to create a cheerful, happy mood toward the readers while they're reading.
Casts used = 5/5
I am totally in love with the casts! Nice job choosing them.
Originality= 18/20
I think it's very great so no comment on this part.
Storyline/plotting = 19 /20
Interesting plot/storyline, you know how to hook the readers' attention very well, which is a very good thing and needed for a great author. Greta job!
Spelling/Grammar = 3/5
Over all OK, but I seldom saw mistakes along the way together with a few typos so be sure to check it again and fix those. Nice job.
Overall enjoyment = 9 /10
I really enjoyed the story, thanks for writing it! Great job and please don't be offended by my comments ^_^, if you have any complains please contact me.
Total: 90/1oo
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