Work And Relationships Don't Go Well ... Agree

Title: Work And Relationships Don’t Go Well…Agree?
Author: by Ivory_love
URLhttp: http://www.winglin.net/fanfic/Ivory_love/
Reviewed by: Lamer_

Title = 8/10
Interesting Title.. It did catch my eye when I first read it.. Suit the plot of the story.. Work and relationships..

Creativity of the story = 17/20
Romance in a company.. Interesting.. How the story twist with Hebe and Chun then to Hebe and Arron is interesting.. Office love and works really doesn’t goes well in your story I can see.. Nice job..

Posters & background = 10 /10
I love the poster and background! It’s lively and bright and very vibrant. Suitable for romance type.. The font that you're using is very easy to read and it doesn't hurt the readers' eyes while reading like some other stories I have seen.

Casts used = 4/5
S.H.E and Fahrenheit is popular nowadays..

Originality= 17/20

Nice job in the twist in the story.. Very interesting and cute.. Lovely in it’s way.. Good job..

Storyline/plotting = 18 /20

Your storyline is quite interesting it. I love it a lot.. Nice flow in the storyline.. The twist in it was nice and good.. good job.. :)

Spelling/Grammar = 4/5
Spot some.. But overall it’s good.. nice job..

Overall enjoyment = 8 /10

I really did enjoy this fanfic, it's great.. Lovely office love stories and cute couple in it..

Total: 86