August 10
Reviewed by: lzj96
Title = 9/10
The title sounds nice and also very significent
The title sounds nice and also very significent
Creativity of the story = 15/20
It has not much twist but the part for the plotting may be better
It has not much twist but the part for the plotting may be better
Posters & background = 10/10
I like the colours and pictures used it somehow shows that there's some light reflection.
I like the colours and pictures used it somehow shows that there's some light reflection.
Casts used = 4/5
It doesen't make it special for Aaron and Hebe pairing but it's still very nice.
It doesen't make it special for Aaron and Hebe pairing but it's still very nice.
Originality= 16/20
the story not very special but it is more into if you add more casting and more incidents happen
the story not very special but it is more into if you add more casting and more incidents happen
Storyline/plotting = 18/20
I like your story plotting although it is very common,but those ex-girl/boyfriends and the promise part seems nice to me
I like your story plotting although it is very common,but those ex-girl/boyfriends and the promise part seems nice to me
Spelling/Grammar = 3/5
We stood there for a few seconds in silence.It should be "We stood there in silence for a few seconds."
We stood there for a few seconds in silence.It should be "We stood there in silence for a few seconds."
Overall enjoyment = 8/10
It will be better if you add more unexpecting twist!
It will be better if you add more unexpecting twist!
Total: 83/100
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