babywingz

Title这该死的爱
Author: babywingz
URL: http://www.winglin.net/fanfic/babywingz7/
Reviewed by: Lamer_

Title = 8/10
Interesting Title.. It did catch my eye when I first read it.. Unique in it’s way..

Creativity of the story = 13/20
Tragic story.. The creativity-ness is lacking as the storyline is a bit like those love-hate plot.. But your detail description of the emotions add on some marks for it..

Posters & background = 10 /10
I love the poster.. It’s lovely.. The font that you're using is very easy to read and it doesn't hurt the readers' eyes while reading like some other stories I have seen.. It also suit the theme of the story..

Casts used = 4/5
Chun and Ella.. I love the pairing.. Nice one..

Originality= 15/20
The originality is there.. It’s a sad but interesting story.. Maybe you can add in more emotion of the character to enhance the tragic feeling..

Storyline/plotting = 16 /20

Although your tragic genre is a great idea.. But the plot is pretty same as those love-hate story.. But you have a much more detail emotional for the character to enhance the story.. I suggest you keep up the good work for the emotion part and add in more of them to enhance the story..

Spelling/Grammar = 5/5
Full mark for you.. I hardly spot any spelling or grammar mistake.. Good Job..

Overall enjoyment = 9 /10 I really enjoy myself for the story.. Although it’s one-shot but I think it’s great.. Keep up the good work..

Total: 80