Unknown Love

Title:Unknown Love
Author: by devilishgiirl aka lildragongurl~
URL: http://www.winglin.net/fanfic/unknown_love
Reviewed by: Lamer_

Title = 7/10
Interesting Title.. It did catch my eye when I first read it.. Unique in it’s way..

Creativity of the story = 13/20
Romance story.. With school life.. Well.. It sound like those same old plot used at winglin.. But you add in a bit more creative-ness into it.. Adding in more emotion and detail events may helps more..

Posters & background = 8/10
I love the poster.. It’s lovely.. The font that you're using is very easy to read and it doesn't hurt the readers' eyes while reading like some other stories I have seen.. It also suit the theme of the story..

Casts used = 4/5
Bosco Wong Leila Tong.. I love the pairing.. Nice one..

Originality= 15/20
The originality is there.. It’s a sad but interesting story.. Maybe you can add in more emotion of the character to enhance the romantic feeling..

Storyline/plotting = 14 /20

Your storyline is like those school life love story.. With a little bit more creative-ness into it.. Maybe it will be more better.. Adding more emotional parts and twists may help in enhancing the whole romantic feeling..

Spelling/Grammar = 1.5/5
Full of mistake in it.. You tend to use short form for a lot of words.. I can see you are a singaporean because you use a lot of singlish in it.. I suggest you not to use to much singlish as not all reader understand it.. Readers have a hard time reading and understanding the story if they don’t understand singlish..

Overall enjoyment = 7/10

I really enjoy myself for the story.. The romance part is lovely and nice.. I love the part when both the main cast realize they fall on each other unknowingly..

Total: 69.5