Lost Reflection

Title: Lost Reflection
Author: frh_rocks!!
URL: http://www.winglin.net/fanfic/lost_reflection/
Reviewed By: Yvonne


Title = 8/10
Interesting title. Mysterious and captivating at the same time.

Creativity of the story = 17/20
I can see the way your creativity flow into the story. You put all your creative thoughts to it. Very creative, great job!

Posters & background = 10/10
Your poster has a very captivating effect. The colors and all make it so much more attractive.

Casts used = 3/5
Fahrenheit and S.H.E are very common nowadays. The pairings you used are also quite common.

Originality= 15/20
Some parts along the way are a little cliched but overall it's fine.

Storyline/plotting = 16/20
Like I said, along the way there are some parts which are quite cliched. But the pace your story is going is just fine.

Spelling/Grammar = 3/5
You might want to recheck your chapters after you're done.Because I spotted quite a few errors here and there. Overall enjoyment = 6/10I enjoyed reading your story. Keep up the good work.

Total: 78/100