Me, His Maid

Title: Me, His Maid
Author: by forever_sfh
URL: http://www.winglin.net/fanfic/his_maid/
Reviewed by: Lamer_

Title = 7.5/10
Interesting Title.. It did catch my eye when I first read it.. Catchy and short.. :)

Creativity of the story = 16/20
Very sweet and lovely story.. I like the sweet way of how they fall in love… Sweet and clear..

Posters & background = 9/10
I love the poster and background! Great layout and theme.. It really suit the love genre.. Pink really give people a sweet taste..

Casts used = 4/5
Hebe and Arron.. I adore this pair very much..

Originality= 16/20 Not too bad.. Very sweet and loving.. I love the sweetness and clear breaking parts.. It doesn’t drag like some story.. :) Good job..

Storyline/plotting = 17 /20
Although it’s pretty common plot used.. I still like the sweet and clear way you wrote.. Make me really felt so in love with the story.. Good job.. :)

Spelling/Grammar = 4.5/5
I hardly spot any spelling or grammar mistake.. Good Job.. I can’t blame you for the spacing part as you explain..

Overall enjoyment = 8.5 /10

The fanfic was really sweet and nice.. Lovely and good.. I love the sweet moment of the couple.. Good job.. :)

Total: 82.5