Once Upon A Curse

Title: Once Upon A Curse
Author: by sn0wiie
URL: http://www.winglin.net/fanfic/FeiLunHai/
Reviewed by: Lamer_

Title = 9/10
Interesting Title.. It did catch my eye when I first read it.. Unique in it’s way.. It does match with the story.. A Curse.. :)

Creativity of the story = 15/20
Pretty funny at some part.. It was a nice plot with a nice flow.. Good job..

Posters & background = 7 /10
I love the poster and background! But the color theme doesn’t really suit the genre of funny.. Maybe you should try something bright instead.. But it’s not too bad after all..

Casts used = 4/5
Interesting Cast use.. Mixture of cast is good..

Originality= 14/20

Not too bad.. Parts are pretty good and funny to read on.. Originality was there for times.. The flow was nice and good..

Storyline/plotting = 14 /20
Your storyline at some moment was a bit confusing to me.. Jumping here and there and switching places to places.. Making me a bit hard to catch up.. But.. It was rather nice to read this kind of lovely story.. Good job..

Spelling/Grammar = 4/5
I hardly spot any spelling or grammar mistake.. Good Job..

Overall enjoyment = 7 /10

The fanfic was really funny and nice.. :) Keep up the good work.. I really enoojy reading it.. :)
Total: 74