Superstar's Runaway
Title: Superstar's Runaway
Author: by anaa xD
URL: http://www.winglin.net/fanfic/anaa7/
Reviewed by: Lamer_
Title = 10/10
Interesting Title.. It did catch my eye when I first read it.. Unique in it’s way.. Superstar runaway.. :)
Creativity of the story = 19/20
I totally adore your comedy way of writing.. How you made them bump into S.H.E look-a-like and how things turn out to be so different from other story.. Your comedy writing really helps a lot for the creativity-ness and I hope to see more of them in the upcoming updates for your story.. But do add in more emotional-parts of the character to enhance the story..
Posters & background = 10 /10
I love the poster.. It’s lovely.. The font that you're using is very easy to read and it doesn't hurt the readers' eyes while reading like some other stories I have seen.. And I totally think the poster suit the theme.. :)
Casts used = 5/5
Fahrenheit & S.H.E.R.. The way you made the cast looks and feels in the story look refreshing to me.. Good job..
Originality= 19/20
The story is totally funny and great.. I love how the superstar runaway and met S.H.E look-a-like whom don’t eve know who Fahrenheit is.. The idea is crazy and great.. Very original and nice..
Storyline/plotting = 19/20
Your storyline is totally funny and great.. I like the flow of the popular superstar running away and met strange events that they don’t even can explain and the comedy part of the story really tickle me a lot.. Great job.. Maybe I suggest you add in more emotion part to let the reader feel how the character feels..
Spelling/Grammar = 4/5
Found some.. But overall still ok.. Overall enjoyment = 10 /10 I really did enjoy this fanfic, it's great so keep on updating! I’m very excited and anxious to know what will happen next.. I really can’t stop laughing at how the events turns and your comedy writing really brighten up my day..
Total: 96
Additional Remark: Although I finish my reviews.. I really hope you can update soon because I can’t wait to read on the great story.. Really.. It’s a really funny story that never fails to made me laugh.. Update soon..
Author: by anaa xD
URL: http://www.winglin.net/fanfic/anaa7/
Reviewed by: Lamer_
Title = 10/10
Interesting Title.. It did catch my eye when I first read it.. Unique in it’s way.. Superstar runaway.. :)
Creativity of the story = 19/20
I totally adore your comedy way of writing.. How you made them bump into S.H.E look-a-like and how things turn out to be so different from other story.. Your comedy writing really helps a lot for the creativity-ness and I hope to see more of them in the upcoming updates for your story.. But do add in more emotional-parts of the character to enhance the story..
Posters & background = 10 /10
I love the poster.. It’s lovely.. The font that you're using is very easy to read and it doesn't hurt the readers' eyes while reading like some other stories I have seen.. And I totally think the poster suit the theme.. :)
Casts used = 5/5
Fahrenheit & S.H.E.R.. The way you made the cast looks and feels in the story look refreshing to me.. Good job..
Originality= 19/20
The story is totally funny and great.. I love how the superstar runaway and met S.H.E look-a-like whom don’t eve know who Fahrenheit is.. The idea is crazy and great.. Very original and nice..
Storyline/plotting = 19/20
Your storyline is totally funny and great.. I like the flow of the popular superstar running away and met strange events that they don’t even can explain and the comedy part of the story really tickle me a lot.. Great job.. Maybe I suggest you add in more emotion part to let the reader feel how the character feels..
Spelling/Grammar = 4/5
Found some.. But overall still ok.. Overall enjoyment = 10 /10 I really did enjoy this fanfic, it's great so keep on updating! I’m very excited and anxious to know what will happen next.. I really can’t stop laughing at how the events turns and your comedy writing really brighten up my day..
Total: 96
Additional Remark: Although I finish my reviews.. I really hope you can update soon because I can’t wait to read on the great story.. Really.. It’s a really funny story that never fails to made me laugh.. Update soon..
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