Your Heart, My Heart

Title: Your Heart, My Heart

Author: Faridah, Harmony, Maddie, Maira, Geri, Monica

URL: http://www.winglin.net/fanfic/Edwise/

Reviewed by: Yvonne

Title = 6/10

I advice you not to use a song name as your fan fic title as it won't captivate readers as much as a brand new title.

Creativity of the story = 17/20

Your creativity can be easily seen through your story.Keep up the good job!

Posters & background = 6/10

Don't you think the poster is a little too small? And also a little too plain? You should have put a background and also change the font colour.

Casts used = 5/5

Cyndi and Nicholas are rarely seen on winglin.Great choice of casts!

Originality= 17/20

Along the way there are some parts that are quite cliched but it's still fine.

Storyline/plotting = 18 /20

As mentioned earlier,along the way there are some parts that are quite cliched.But your story pace is going at the right speed and your story is also smooth flowing.

Spelling/Grammar = 4/5

Next time maybe you could recheck the chapter first incase of errors made.Because I spotted some errors here and there.

Overall enjoyment = 6/10

I enjoyed reading your story.

Total: 79/ 100